Kia ora Atherton, you have done a great job of creating a visual blog profile. I like it how your pictures are all really clear and they let me get to know more about you. It was such a good idea for you to ask your teacher to help you, I bet now you will be able to help someone else if they get stuck.
ia ora Atherton my name is Ocean from Kaikohe West School.I really like the way you talked about your self and I hope you acheve your future goals. I want to be a Karati teacher and a olympic gymnast. Next time you should check your spelling and punctuation. If you want to check out my blog here is the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora, It's Azalea I really like your Visual Blog Profile. When I read your post I found out that you found it a bit hard to replace the pictures. Make sure you check your spelling and punctuation. Keep up the great work.
Hello Atherton We are Tuamelie and Ben Your Smile Looks Awesome and Your friends Smiles Are Amazing And your Favorite things is KFC That My favorite Food too and When you Grow up and Your going to be a police I hope you get A LOT OF MONEY!!! and You'll be rich and I liked Your Friends How they Smiled and Keep Being you. Bye!! From Tuamelie and Ben
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Kia ora Atherton, you have done a great job of creating a visual blog profile. I like it how your pictures are all really clear and they let me get to know more about you. It was such a good idea for you to ask your teacher to help you, I bet now you will be able to help someone else if they get stuck.
ReplyDeleteia ora Atherton my name is Ocean from Kaikohe West School.I really like the way you talked about your self and I hope you acheve your future goals. I want to be a Karati teacher and a olympic gymnast. Next time you should check your spelling and punctuation. If you want to check out my blog here is the link http://kws-ocean-lee.blogspot.com/
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ReplyDeleteI really like your Visual Blog Profile.
When I read your post I found out that you found it a bit hard to replace the pictures.
Make sure you check your spelling and punctuation. Keep up the great work.
Hello Atherton We are Tuamelie and Ben Your Smile Looks Awesome and Your friends Smiles Are Amazing And your Favorite things is KFC That My favorite Food too and When you Grow up and Your going to be a police I hope you get A LOT OF MONEY!!! and You'll be rich and I liked Your Friends How they Smiled and Keep Being you. Bye!!
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hi Atherton my name is Patrick I like what you are going to be to the future hope you have a good weekend
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